Wednesday, March 30, 2011

Perfect Cowboy by Kat Von Wild

I think this can be a great book, however, it needs some work.  It feels like a first draft.  There are plot holes and it obviously hasn’t been edited for grammar.  Words are misused and sentence structure is poor.  The story has attraction but I think in an attempt to get the steamy love scenes the author has skipped over some plot necessities to keep the reader interested.  

I read the first 20 pages or so that were available in the sample and didn’t get further.  Its hard to read a book that doesn’t feel complete.  I suggest to the author that you re-read your book and see if it makes sense to you, especially the parts about how the ranch is ran and how Angel became in charge of the ranch, if that really is the case.  That part was really confusing.  Good luck!

Review by Sue Owen 
Kat Von Wild Website I couldn't find a personal site so that is the link for her Smashwords author page.

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