I was really sorry to have this story end. When I got to the last page I found myself saying, “wait. Stop. What? NOOOOO!” Rarely do books and especially short story endings surprise me. This one did, darn it!
It sucked me into the story, made me love the main characters and then pulled the rug right out from under me. Bad Harmony! Needless to say, I loved this story. I was riveted from the first moment and carried away to the end. I think this could be a draft for an amazing full-length book full of twists and turns and (in my humble opinion) a twisty end different from what is here (sorry, I want a different ending, please, please, please?)! Left me ranting like a small child.
I highly recommend reading this story. Be sure to pick up your Kleenexes off the table when you are done and put them in the trash.
Smashwords Link: http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/81628 (adult filter must be turned off)
Amazon Link: http://www.amazon.com/Gleaming-White-ebook/dp/B005HAS32U/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1315226895&sr=8-1
B&N Link: http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/gleaming-white-terra-harmony/1104873193?ean=2940013134423&itm=1&usri=gleaming%2bwhite
Reviewed by Sue Owen